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Angel In Blood

January 29, 2013
By CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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There she lay before me,
So stunning, so still
Her skin so soft, so pure
Covered in blood.

Her blue eyes wide open,
Dried tears ran along her temples,
Her dress as white as snow,
But covered in blood.
Broken chandeliers,
Broken glass
Her giant, dark wings,
Wide open, imprinting
The white marble floor
All in blood.

She fought her Brothers
She fought her Sisters,
That beautiful Angel,
That divine Angel
Ending her Eternal life,
She lay before me,
She was dressed in blood.
Her smooth, golden hair,
Covered her alluring face
There she lay before me,
She died, with her hair dyed
In blood.

And there she lay before me,
The beautiful Angel,
The divine Angel,
The Angel in blood


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on Feb. 6 2013 at 5:47 am
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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Lol, thanks so much, Army :D ... Well, you could tell me where it sounded awkward.

Armyj13 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 1:36 pm
Armyj13 SILVER, Traskwood, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
The only easy day; was yesterday.

This is a beautiful poem. Just like you best friend!!