the crows have claimed this place
wearing masks, hiding, crying still –
here, the dirt is made of us
wearing masks, hiding, crying still –
here, the dirt is made of us
AlaskaFrost
such a short, haunting poem that conveys so much sadness and carries so much power and beauty. amazing
SaphiraBrightscalesThis is an amazing poem and does exactly what it' s meant to do...It's haunting and saddening... Though I like your word choice!
TickTockBANGI read the opem before the description, and it was still so powerful and dark on its own before I even knew what it was about. Fantastic poem--putting so much into three lines is a major accomplishment, in my opinion and you've done it beautifully.
amrex13Wow, this is incredibly haunting, but so beautiful
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