Cambio Network
Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

I'm Halfway Out, The Choice Is Yours

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
A tear runs down my cheek;
cos’ I want what I feel is no longer there;
not anymore;
if there was anything there in the first place.

I try and try;
an unsatisfactory person am I?
To feel unworthy is a bully’s job;
so what exactly is my love?

The feeling of something out of my league;
the one I can but hope to achieve.
I am the unworthy;
but why is this?

You play with my heart;
yet your not a tart.
Accidental pain you send me;
true or false?
I doubt a purpose behind all of this;
but god only who knows.

In my hour glass heart your time is running thin;
it's your final chance don’t throw it in the bin.
It is down to you the road we take;
its now or never, what choice will you make?




Join the Discussion


This article has 3 comments. Post your own!

vaidaspade10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 16 at 10:04 pm:
I agree with GoldieLocks19. It was great. The way you spoke in a backwards way to make it more in depth. I really liked it. You should read my poem "Smile." Don't let the name fool you, it is not at all what it seems to be.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
GoldieLocks19This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 16 at 5:14 pm:
I really liked your last part to this, about  your "hour glass heart" and you should really keep writing :) Also if you could check out my poem called Things Happen, that'd be wonderful, but it's up to you
 
BlackbeltJames replied...
Feb. 16 at 7:17 pm :
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate the fact that you like it and took the time to comment. Also, I will have a look at your poem, and I will definitley continue to write, I'll be submitting more soon :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback