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Willow Shade

April 12, 2013
By Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes


The river's rushing on,
The sun is beating down,
The trees are swaying,
The wind is blowing.
I sit here,
In the willow's shade.
I sit here,
Wishing I was brave.
Hidden by darkness,
Hidden by the willow's shade.
Hiding from a future,
Hiding from a future so far,
A future so far away.

I lay down,
In the willow's shade.
I lay down,
Wishing I could run.
That I could run to the river deep.
That I could hide,
In the river's sound.
Run from a future,
A future so far away.

I lay sleeping,
In the willow's shade.
I lay weeping,
In the willow's shade.
I lay dreaming,
In the willow's shade.
I wish I could,
Stand with you.
I wish I could,
Be with you.
In a future,
A future so far.
A future,
Where I can sleep.

But I sat down,
In the willow's shade.
But I laid down,
In the willow's shade.
But I laid sleeping,
In the willow's shade.
Now I'm sleeping,
With the fish.
Because the river,
Rushed me away.
The river rushes on.
The sun beats down.
The trees sway.
The wind blows.
And I sleep,
With the fishes here.
Next to you,
Where I loved you most.
In willow's shade.



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on Apr. 24 2013 at 8:56 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

So incredible! It's very interesting... I found myself imagining someone at each different circumstance... WOW. Very smooth, very well-written, and I lvoed the repetition. Great, great, great job!

on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:02 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

I intend to!! :)

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on Apr. 24 2013 at 4:57 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

Wowowowowwow! I love this poem; it all flows perfectly smooth, ur imagery is fantastic, and you allow emotions to flow strongly but not too much. I love the slight repetition u gave as well. Awesome and keep writing! :P