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Sickness MAG
You wreak black
like nightfall.
You words are
dark and sharp.
You spear hearts
to see them bleed.
You run wild
with the sun
which so willingly
burns you.
Your harsh words
have never echoed
so clear and sound
with the wind.
Your words dug
gashes in the moon
and light the sky.
Dark looms and
has never hesitated.
We wonder why
© Anonymous
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Shelby Vincent said...
on Feb. 26 2009 at 4:49 pm
LOVE THIS WORK!!! But at the end line I winder why you put... I wonder why :P
The Violist said...
on Feb. 13 2009 at 7:56 pm
I thought this was something to speak, it speaks to me and my friend thinks it is awesome. It sets the tone and the diction in it is distinctive, it has an amazing flow to it.
Babygy243 said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 4:17 pm
Nice Poem Needs Work On That Tho...
FreddyDwashere said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 2:27 pm
I love this poem it's dark in good way. It makes you think.
LeeleeSammy said...
on Jan. 15 2009 at 2:13 am
i LOVE THISS POEM WAY BETTER THSN THE OTHER I READ I LOOOOOVVVVEE IT AMAZING WORK PERFECTION!!!!!
alyssa said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 8:01 pm
good job
karate master said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 2:55 pm
this is very good
beccabby7 said...
on Jan. 9 2009 at 12:35 pm
This was an amazing poem. Spectalur. I thought that it was very clear what you were trying to say. I hope my poems are as good as yours
abbystrub said...
on Jan. 9 2009 at 12:29 am
Very nice job. Your biting verbs and fantastic imagery made a dark subject artistic without transcending reality. As others said, your last line is especially powerful. Keep writing!
RaineyDay.1 said...
on Jan. 8 2009 at 9:41 pm
incredible =]
Disturbed@5 said...
on Dec. 31 2008 at 3:54 pm
this is a great poem and keep up with doin wat ur doin
lyskers71 said...
on Dec. 14 2008 at 7:19 am
thanks so much your poem really inspired a song of mine<3 you a have a fabulous future thank you alot!
Edward<3 said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 4:57 pm
that was an amazing poem. keep it up!
Shay16 said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 4:11 am
I liked your use of vocabulary and imagery. I thought it was amazinggg. :) Keep it up, girl.
xplayer123 said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 2:33 pm
i thought it was a great poem keep it up!
xplayer123 said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 2:30 pm
this was a great poem. sike
abcdefghijklmnop said...
on Dec. 8 2008 at 10:48 pm
Amazing! Great use of assonance!
Skatergirl98 said...
on Dec. 2 2008 at 4:04 pm
That was amazing. It was very deep and sencere. I loved it. It is very honest and open. I'm a fellow poet. Hope you'll comment my work soon.
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