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All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



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on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:55 pm
WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

Please everyone comment this is very good I likeie

on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:54 pm
WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

Yay yummy poem

on Aug. 31 2011 at 2:07 pm

Well it seems to me like this kid Ryan has no friends and needs to get out more. I dont like this poem because it seems like this kid is doing nothing but complaining about life. If you want a friend, then go out and make some. Dont sit there and whine and write stupid poetry about it.

 


minecrafter said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:36 pm
minecrafter, Farmers Branch, Texas
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Ill be your friend

 


EagleBreeze1 said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:21 pm
EagleBreeze1, Dallas, Texas
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I agree with StarDayDreamer, I think those sentences define the poem, they give it more emotion.

JSM1996 said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:13 pm
JSM1996, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm Done!"

This poem is very well written and it's a nice message that the author is giving out.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 10:49 am
StarDayDreamer, Carrollton, Texas
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Love the beginnning and the last stanza was very strong! :D

 


LOL_LORD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 10:40 am
LOL_LORD, LOL, Texas
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Yeah, it is an amazing, poem. I can tell how he feels. It is full of emotion.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:23 am
WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

more people need to comment so this will be number one

 


on Aug. 30 2011 at 9:31 pm
AbstractFragment GOLD, Dalmatia,, Pennsylvania
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know what it feels like when all your teeth are falling out really slowly and you don't realize and then you notice that, well, they're really far apart. And then one day... you don't have any teeth anymore." - Where the Wild Things Are

I suppose it gets lonely at the top. I feel your pain. I could always be your friend though :)

 

But of the poem, I like how this poem ends. I believe a successful ending is one of the most important parts of a poem because it leaves the reader with a taste in their mouth after reading it. The after-taste of this is sweet, and then slightly bitter. The comedy helps equal out the tragedy which keeps this from becoming over-whelmingly depressing.


LOL_LORD said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 10:51 am
LOL_LORD, LOL, Texas
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I dont know what to say.

 


on Aug. 26 2011 at 8:40 pm
Mroper38 BRONZE, Guntown, Mississippi
3 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody ever drowned in sweat.. (X-c)

I shall be yourfriend. I understand

on Aug. 26 2011 at 5:10 pm
soarlikeme23 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands" e.e. cummings

This is beautiful. I love it! The last stanza, especially the last line, is so powerful. 

on Aug. 23 2011 at 1:36 am
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.&rdquo; - Unknown<br /> I will change this every week!

I love this poem! <3 Always remember that you're never alone! :)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 7:43 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 769 comments
I am soooooooooooooooo sorry for u! maybe if they see this they wont be mean to you anymore! But anyway! Great writing! :)(:

on Aug. 21 2011 at 5:27 pm
SwallowedByInsanity PLATINUM, Hillsdale, New Jersey
22 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is a poison, but it is also the antidote.&quot;

I really like your writing style! People judge me inside and out. I've been called a lesbian for 'dressing like a boy'. I've been called emo and a cutter for getting my hair cut in a certain fashion.

I'm definitley going to read your other pieces.


on Aug. 21 2011 at 2:04 pm
xximjustmexx PLATINUM, Oak Forest, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There&#039;s no god. There&#039;s no religion. There&#039;s only life, what you do with YOUR life, who YOU let affect YOUR life. Bad things happen to everyone, you just have to learn to deal with them.

5/5 I can relate to you. Honestly. People don't look at the big picture. They see what they want to see, and that's it. But how I get through, is that I tell myself that one day, I'm going to be the stronger person. You will find someone. Trust me.

on Aug. 21 2011 at 11:50 am
JusticeLiberty BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.&quot;<br /> Aldous Huxley

I WANNA BE YOUR FRIEND! YOU SOUND AWESOME TO ME! I am sorry that people are so mean to you! :( Reading this made me feel sad.

on Aug. 21 2011 at 11:06 am
dolphinportkey7 GOLD, D, Other
12 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Because I knew you, I have been changed for good&quot; AND &quot;&#039;Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all&quot;

I think this might've broke my heart...

on Aug. 21 2011 at 9:23 am
Anonymous_Me DIAMOND, Marble Hill, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is but a walking shadow.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Shakespeare (Macbeth)

The writing style is great <3

I love how you mention all the money you get to spend, yet you don't. It just shows that no matter how much you have, you need someone to share it with.