All I Need Is a Friend | Teen Ink

All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1547 comments.


on Sep. 3 2010 at 12:13 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

agreed with karensung

on Sep. 3 2010 at 12:10 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

although I would like to believe you're right.

on Sep. 3 2010 at 12:10 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

but if God was always there, and making people feel complete, then wouldn't this guy feel complete already (because God is always there, not just when you need him), and not have written this poem in the first place because God made him feel complete and not lonely?

Nerbz said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:35 am
this is really intense, the words almost make you feel just as lonely by reading it. talk to someone out of random im sure youll get a smile or someone will be your friend if you did, if not those kind of people aret worth it. god is also always there he makes you feel complete

on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:21 am
SunnySummers GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 1 photo 54 comments

   First of all, I want to say that if you let Him, God will be a better friend than anybody you'll ever meet.

   With the most important thing stated, now I want to talk about the piece itself. Well written. Definitely well written.  And if you stay true to yourself, not pretending to be something you're not, you'll find true friends.

   Most of my friends are the exact way you describe yourself, except that they act crazy and do whatever instead of trying to fit in. And they fit in perfectly with the other people like them!!


bergert BRONZE said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 7:31 am
bergert BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, you have to make lemonade...or else you look like an idiot standing there holding lemons."-Melissa Graulich

Your intelligence isn't something you should be ashamed of. The best thing to do would be to just be yourself and let other people come into your life. No amount of money is going to buy you the joy of having a real friend; a friend you don't have to change yourself for. I thought that this was exceptionally well written, though. Really, really great job.

on Sep. 2 2010 at 9:04 am
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE, Spostylvania, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I like to move it, move it."-Anonymous

This is simply amazing. I admire the way you describe everything so well. I can also relate to how you try to keep up with your friends at school. Sometimes its better to be you and not a copy of someone else. Dont try to be like them, try to find who you are and how you fit in with the rest of them. Individuality is key. Very nice :))))

on Sep. 1 2010 at 5:07 pm
spoarder SILVER, Ankeny, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments
i can really relate to this. by the way it is really good(:

on Aug. 30 2010 at 6:55 pm
Fallen_Fairy GOLD, Moss Pt., Mississippi
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stand not for yourself but for those in the position not to."

I enjoyed reading it. I can completely relate to it.

on Aug. 30 2010 at 2:06 am
onestepcloser-tomydreams BRONZE, Kinuso, Other
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away- anonymous

i loved the honesty and the voice of this peice i can really relate to it

on Aug. 30 2010 at 1:57 am
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments
i can relate to most of it, this is really good

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:45 pm
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
23 articles 0 photos 212 comments
cant completely relate to this, though iv had alot of friends with god complexes who were "jerks", heres a tip spontaneous conga line(you initiate it) is a great way to meet people(seriously)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:12 am
i really liked ur poem its something i can relate 2 sometimes i feel like i could really use a true friend. keep on writing :]

on Aug. 27 2010 at 2:07 am
Darkness95 SILVER, McFarland, California
6 articles 6 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe Diem. Seize the day!"

Wow! I love your poem. I can identify with you in needing a friend. Sometimes feel as though I have no one. You got the message across in a powerful way. Good job. :]

on Aug. 26 2010 at 8:25 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If it comes out of the lion&#039;s mouth...it will be on the test.&quot;<br /> -Mr. Bala

Excellent poem. The writing structure could use a little work but the emotion could not be more powerful and it hits right at home for many "losers" and "nerds" out there. I should know. I really related to the part about the librarian. In my middle school, the librarian was the only one who actually enjoyed my company. She was a nice lady, but god knows I could have used someone my own age to talk to.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 6:46 am
Open_5hoelaces BRONZE, Vadodra, Other
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Your life is quite like mine.

Together as friends we both will be fine.


on Aug. 19 2010 at 6:10 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
3 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

sorry, its just that i know how u feel and i hate to read of someone feeling the same way. it sucks

Austy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 2:22 am
Austy BRONZE, New Rockford, North Dakota
4 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Professionals built the Titanic, but amateurs built the ark.<br /> Live life like there is no tomorrow

THis has been one of my most favorite poems. It shows the character and what he is into. I didn't however like the beginning with the words so seperate but i did like the seperation between the designers. But i loved the poem as one item.

on Aug. 16 2010 at 11:34 am
TheShadowsHaveEyes SILVER, Lansing, Michigan
9 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
How much dirt I gotta throw in the ocean to make a new island

 This is really good. I liked the repititon of 'all I need is a friend', it made the poem.

  Also, I liked how you went into great detail to describe the narrators appearance. It made it a lot easier to picture and it made me want to call someone I know might need a friend.

Great job :) :)


merv956 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 12:57 pm
merv956 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
i love this poem it really speakes to me id love to meet some one like this who is truly in touch with their inner feelings.