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The simplicity makes it great!

Love it! You captured so much meaning in FOUR lines; that's talent! Keep doing what you're doing, because it's perfect!

If anyone is bored and feels like giving feedback on a poem, can you check out mine? It's called "Rock Bottom" and is in the writing forum under poetry. Thanks!

You could have rambled on forever about sentimentality and everything else for endless verses. Instead you only asked for a few seconds of our time, and it is still as good.

Plus, please check out my poems "True Colors" and "Shoveled" if you get a chance and leave some feedback!

Great Job!!

Same here!!! :)))

Short and sweet. I enjoyed this. =)

Would anyone be willing to check out my poem? Please give me some comments/rates, I need more feedback! Thanks!

that was! great

So true! :)

Yeah, you had a really good choice of words.

You got your meaning stated in just one verse!  I wish I could do that.

that was brilliant in so few words! really talented!

Love the poem! but maybe if you talked about why it would make you happy in the last line it would flow better.

very pretty :) you'v a clever mind :)

wow, what a great picture of your imagination!

 

this is really good i love it it makes you tghink. dont listont o people who dnt like it. i love it

i feel like it's a bit redundant.  simple poems seem to sit with me much more smoothly than a longer one but i feel like this poem is lacking feeling.  the first two lines i felt were setting me up for a beautiful metaphor or introducing me to your message.  the third line kind of threw me off a bit.  i think it would have been more interesting for me to see as a reader, something more along the lines of what names you would've picked or metaphorically traveling down the road... (more »)

I think the ending of your poem needs more work. It seems a little weak. But other than that your poem seems to carry a lot of meaning in it.