Bus Trip of a Black God

Interesting! :)

I really like this poem it has alot of meaning behind it.

very deep and has a nice flow to it

this is wonderful. I feel several things; a subtle introduction of race, like the color of a man dominates his world. but why is the white man never called the white man, never distinguished as seeing a white God, white heaven, white Savior, just God, Heaven, Savior? Such innocent beauty in one's interaction with a stranger; slightly dangerous, but harmless. Unlearning what we've been taught about them. The comfort of oneself is contagious, the "hmmm" being the most memorable hum the listener wi... (more »)

This is a very interesting piece. I really like the way it flows and how it all comes together.

I love the flow of the poem and especially the ending! Nice topic.

Love it! Rally great work and nice way of description.

Wonderful job.... Very nice :)

First of all, loved it! Second, I'm also from the valley and  though it was awesome that you mentioned the bus lines here. Good job! :)

I like it! Five stars, definately.

That was really good! :)

Wonderful work; the connection between religion and personal perspective is particularly intriguing.

this is amazing and its so deep too

i hav a ? though.. how long does it take for teen ink to verify an article

cuz its taking a long long time

 

This poem is Lovely

If there was a like button, i would like this.

This poem made me smile. I can see everything happening, and I understand the humming. This is a great poem. :)

I really like this poem. It was interesting. I really like it because it's different than most poems.