Graffiti

I live in a city with graffiti everywhere, so this poem gives me a new perspective. If I were you I would change the last word to walls; it emphasizes the commanality.

I love this poem :) but ya need another syllable in the first line :D

simple but directly moving. ^_^b

the only problem i see in this poem is that the first line has only 4 syllables. but otehrwise it is a great poem and Ii like the originality.

hey larzthesquirrel its still a cool poem wether its 4 our not so shove it

there are only four syllables in the first line. you would need another syllable for it to be a haiku

good poem otherwise

its a very strong and powerful and the picture helps alot

This is good! Lots of power for a haiku.

isn't a haiku 5,7,5?

The words give off the feeling of hate and yet it moves me...

I like it =].

very visual.

beautiful.

the words choices are great!! love it!

interesting.

this is one of the best haikus i have read! :)

Wow this is awesome

nyc!!!...its ....meaning ful

amazingly amazing

wow i jus got wet reading this!!