First Kiss

By TheNatural, aurora, OR

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My smile widens
Your lips pressing onto mine
Wishing not to end

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Andrew121957 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 3:20 pm:

Awesome! :P

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Dolly9471 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 2:02 pm:

Love this. So true!

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beautifulspirit said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 7:58 am:

Just like a first kiss is~ Very sweet

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tatertot1311 said...
May 31, 2011 at 7:00 pm:

Beautiful :) so much emotion in three lines!

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thedreamer said...
May 31, 2011 at 6:37 pm:

very cute:)

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Rcozzone said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 7:50 am:

awesome

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Lilybean17 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm:

Captures the moment! :D

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danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:41 pm:

Very nice, a lot of emotion!

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purple_panda said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:23 pm:

This shows so much in just one little kaiku. Really well done!

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Braids said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 6:08 pm:

this was (like i always say), beautimus:}

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DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:38 am:

Thats exactly how first kisses are!

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BleedingRose said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 10:52 am:

<33333333
Awesome sauce! Very good, loved it! Mind commenting on some of my work?

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Love2Write22 said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm:

<333333

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Christine M. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 4:20 pm:

i like...z ...would like to read more

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dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 4:14 pm:

love it! it's very sweet and although it didn't seem deep, i got a very deep meaning from it :) very simple, yet very good and effective! keep it up! (oh and please comment on some of my work)

PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:18 am :

I agree.... It keeps one wondering.... Comment on mine please!!