Disappointment

Short, simple and Fantastic!!!! is all i gotta say. Nice job :)

I like this haiku a lot! It reminds me the days that there was rain when I needed the sunshine to make me happy. Good job, I really like it. I t brought me sorrow and memories good and bad.

That was very good, and this also brought me disappoinment. Not the haiku itself but rather the haiku. What I'm trying to say is that you chose a good title as well. :)

Wow! A very strong haiku. In haikus I find it hard to find the right few words, but here they are carefully chosen to describe the rain perfectly.

nicely written. so little words but big meaning.

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Great poem-so little words, yet such vivid pictures. 5/5 stars!

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nice haiku...good meaning.but personally, I really don't like haikus. They're to short to be appreciated.haha.

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

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I like the way I can relate to your poem.

Wow love it :) Fantastic job!

hey this is really awsome i can tell how much you feel the rain

This has such clear imagery and I could almost see the rain streaming down my windows.
Keep writing!