Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken
ChrisJ
loverofmostthingscreativeI really like this. You make a good link between dead leaves and broken dreams that is easily understandable when you read it. Great job!
The_Quiet_GirlAmazing poem. I love it! :) This should definitely be published in the magazine.
This was incredibly good. And that's why I love haikus: they make simple but deep connections.
I really like it. And I love how you descibed them
KimberlywritesWonderful job. Love it.
Amazing! Greatly portrayed. This is totally going to end up in the magazine! :) Would you mind checking out some of my poetry? I'd love to get feedback from a great writer! Thanks!!
Victoria_Pgreat job!!! 5 stars!!! (:
SkimKimchi 5 stars :D
IamtheshyStargirlI decided to read haikus today, yours is the first, and well-deserving of it's number one rating :)
It conveys quiet sadness.
Okay seriously if you don't like it hop off. I think it's really good. So take your stupid comments somewhere els(:
okay, who ever is putting these gross and unnecessary comments on my poem, STOP! Teenink is for constructive critisism, not this bull. knock it off.
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