Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken
Kamilah B. 
Wow! very concise,visual, and flowing!
swimster16Very visual!!! I love how you go very deep with just that kind of space!
This is amazing i love it, and can completly relate with it.
BlueStarling
BleedingRoseI love the comparison, such great form! Don't stop writing! And if you have time, I really wouldn't mind if you commented on some of my work. ;) You have uch talent in so few words, 5 stars.
-Rose
I love it. A wonderful simile that I often think about leaves believe it or not.
I really like this, it caught my eye and I thought you did a really good job. It really goes together. :)
I absolutely adore this haiku! this is my favorite haiku in all the world. kudos to u. check out my work? i suggest Heart On Fire or Just Because
wow this is absolutely wonderful. so beatifully simple. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
hi. i did check out your work before. Great Job!!!!!!!!
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