Like the church bell ring loudy
My heart burst sounds
for you only my heart beats
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My heart burst sounds
for you only my heart beats
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gravinggino226 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 1:57 pm:
Jan. 9, 2012 at 1:57 pm:
great but I agree its not to much of a haiku
dia.dreamerI really like it as a poem, but as many others pointed out, it's not a haiku. if it was, I'd rate it 5 stars! :D
Ke$ha said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 11:02 am:
Mar. 14, 2011 at 11:02 am:
Very good topic but I dont see how it is a haiku it has to many syllables
DiamondsIntheGrass
its really nice, and really sweet, but its not a haiku. the first line is supposed to be 5 syllables, the next 7, and the last 5.
halls said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 2:22 pm:
Sept. 26, 2009 at 2:22 pm:
omg i luv this. its increadable
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