Walking Through the Woods

short  but  pretty  

short but pretty  

I really like this poem. It is written very well. Great job!

I liked this Haiku. It was very dark but very pretty at the same time. It all fit together very well. Nice job!(:

awww this is kinda sad but sweet. Thank you

:)

i love it :)

as everyone else already said, the wind being homeless is just awesome. I loved this haiku...keep writing...and check my poems out too. :)

Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!

This is a fantastic poem!  Homeless wind is genius.

I love the way that you reffered to the wind as homeless, it's great

I really liked the idea of homeless wind. An area for improvement would be to remove the as in the first line. With the as it is not the correct format for a haiku. The last line was worded beautifully. Great job.

Good poem. I really like the second line. :)

wow....your good, but yeah remove the as.

ur poem l00k g00d.

i love the idea of homeless wind, it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem. amazing.

I like how you described the wind as homeless. the simplicity was very nice and I feel it captured a walk in the woods, as you effectively described feeling part of the forest (wind blowing through trees and your heart)

Hey I really like your hikku needs more work but its really good!! keep up the good work! :)

It was good, but I don't understand why you don't just eliminate the word as. It is your writing though, and it was a good poem.