Will it calm again?

WOW that's sublime!.. I love the depth. Amazing Haiku....Maybe check out some of mine?

This is so beautiful it applies to so many aspects of life.

I think I've read this five times now! i keep coming back to it. It's so original! Please write more haikus like this! I just liek reading them :)

Not a lot said but so much meaning! I loved all of the verses and rhythm. Great Haiku!(:

So few words but so much meaning!

Wow i can totally relate. You're very talented. Maybe you can check out my stuff sometime? I would appreciate it! Keep up the good work!!

 

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oooooooh LOVE THIS ONE!!!! simple words with the most powerful meaning ever!!! Makes one think a looot... Keep writing! :) (and check out my poems)

very good haiku,good use of personification.powerful words.

Great imagry and wording. I loved it <3

awww so cute

Beautiful. Deep. Touches my heart.

I really hope it will calm again. :)

This whole poem had great imagery!! This is probably one of the best haikus I had ever read. At first, it seemed like every other haiku I read on here, but then I reflected on it and tried to understand the real meaning. Great Job. :)

love the mirror imagery. 

 

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this is really cool. really makes you think. sort of philosophical. i would love it if you could take a look at some of my work. thanks!

Beautiful.....

Great job - this poem is strong and makes you think about how you look at things, like the water or mirror. Keep it up, and check out my stuff?

beautiful. itz so deep. i luv it!

Beautiful! I Love It:]

Id like to think we are like the water in your poem. The ripples on top will calm but the rock that made them leaves an impression in the sand underneath.

Beautifully written!

Awww... I sure hope it calms again.

Great poem... really touching, speaks to me, and makes me want to read it again and again.

Think up endless possibilies of what it could me. So many different perspectives could be taken... philosophical, maybe?

WOW. I luv this poem:D