Short & sweet

Thats is short and sweet.....and beautiful :) happy writing.... can you also please check out some of my work if you get some time:)

great poem. haikus are short and sweet too. was that intended, or coincidence??

Thanks. I missed a word on the second line. It's supposed to be my summers that have passed on. I'm glad people like my work, gives me a reason to write more.

fantastic!!:)) i really liked it. its so very true and beautiful too

Um, I liked it, but it's not a haiku.  Haikus have a 5-syllable first line, a 7-syllable second line, and a 5-syllable third line.

This certainly lives up to the title! I loved it, and as for writing 100 characters? I had that dilemma also, so I just did this:
,',',',',',',',',', or something cool. Mind commenting on some of my work? thx!
-Rose

I like this, it's good. And for the people above it's short, becaus The title is "short and sweet" so the poem is short and sweet. Please comment or rate my work whenever you're less busy thank you and this your poem is good.

I like it. I don't think it needs to be longer. I put three verses in my haiku but I don't think your realy supposed to. It doesn't matter realy. Please look at mine!

It could have had more dicriptive words.

we liked your poem. but we think it could have been longer and more descriptive.