Little candy heart,
Lying deep down on green grass,
You have all my love.
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Lying deep down on green grass,
You have all my love.
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Aliescha L. Very good, even though it was short it worked, you did an amazing job!!!!!
dragonfly95very deep and very sweet poem conveyed in three little lines...i like it alot, great job.
jrose said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:48 am:
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:48 am:
this is so pretty the poem realy is and the person who wrote it was realy good to i love this poem
Thanks for the feedback, I'm really glad you like it!
-Rose
Bush said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 9:44 am:
Dec. 15, 2010 at 9:44 am:
Made me at first feel bad for the discarded candy heart who was (likely) tossed aside or dropped by two lovers, but then, I felt good for the heart, that someone appreciated it.
Thanks! I love how you give the candy heart so much character, lolz! :)
-Rose
scenequeen
AMAZING!! so muuch deep feeling in 3 little lines
Woot! Thx so much for your comment :D I appreciate it greatly.
-Rose
Sarbear
love this!! lots of emotion in a short little poem. great job! 5 out of 5.
Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it a lot! Thanks for all the comments!
-Rose
Little Bud said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:30 pm:
Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:30 pm:
Short but sweet...literally.
lolz thx! that's what i meant for it i geuss
-Rose
Beard Goth Lady said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 5:47 am:
Mar. 24, 2010 at 5:47 am:
this poem is beautiful how do people write things like this every time i try i fail miserably
Thanks for the comment! And I'm sure you write fine, great even, you just need more self confidence! Trust me, mine is dangerously low! That's why I had a fake name when I first came on here. It's good to start with haikus, just find a pic that inspires you and get typing! You'll get better, trust me! Just rememeber the 5/7/5 rule. ;)
-Rose
b_swainThis is soo cool did you write this as you saw the picture?
Yes, 2/3 of the time I am inspired by pictures I see, mostly on teen ink! Thanks for the comment!
-Rose
-Rose
your welcome nice to know someone other than me does that.
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