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Leopard

Orange and black stripes are
dancing with the new fall leaves
of fierce desire

The blue sequenced sea
is flirting with piercing eyes
of instinct and speed




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lalalland said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 9:20 pm:
i dont get not ALL LEOPARDS r the same! MAKE IT INTERESTING!!! BEFORE I FALL ASLEEP!!!
 
smiley10507 replied...
May 5, 2010 at 10:13 pm :
That is kinda really rude. Be a little nicer. Sure, a little constructive criticism will work, but don't flat out say "you suck. I'm falling asleep." That's mean. 
 
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dkA.M said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 8:58 pm:
Wow that is not constructive comments is it? I would think not All I have to say is RUDE!! RUDE!!
 
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Doununder1054 said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:37 am:
good description I liked how you described the eyes
 
dkA.M replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 10:34 am :
Thx! I am so happy you enjoyed ;)
 
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lepordFAN said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 7:56 am:
this is a deep poem about the power and beauty of lepords
 
dkA.M replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 10:35 am :
Thank you ! I tried to describe the details of a leopard that make them distinctive from any other animal
 
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