Second Chances

This is definitely something many people can relate to...Excellent work.

I could relate to this and I like how you played with the words. Keep going!!!

WOW!!! =)(=

I liked it---this what we would all do if we could re-do something that we did in the past.

Regrets are just a part of life and I love how you were able to capture that in such an interesting way.

I can really relate to this. I really felt where you were coming from...I really liked it! :)

I could totally relate to this poem and you told so much in such little! Simply powerful and amazing!!and if you get the chance could you check out some of my poetry such as A Mirror Image and The sinner confession (and comment and rate them????) it would be greatly appreciated! THANKS! And keep writing because your amazing at it! :)

That was a great poem, I hope to see you writing more in the future.

This was a powerful poem dude. keeping writing .

love how you leave sort of a hanger in the end. awesome.

Very Unique. It Really Makes Sense(:. Its Wonderful.

wow. this is amazingg. u said so much in so few wordz. i luv it plz keep writingg

Simple & really beautiful!

This is pretty touching... I can relate pretty well to it. Good job!