Summer sun is hot
Water brings a cool relief
Sand between my toes
Water brings a cool relief
Sand between my toes
Hippie_Runner
nice haiku! it actually lets me imagine the beach even though it is a short poem!
BleedingRoseI just got back from the beach, lolz! Great haiku, mind commenting on some of mine? Thx!
-Rose
of course i will check out your stuff...
Thanks for commenting!!
and btw, it doesnt have to be short. you can do multiple verses, like
5
7
5
and then
5
7
5
get it?
thank you! i will try to write one that's longer. ill let you know if i do.
:)
thanks, i'd love to read it and comment when you do!
-rose
ok, i'll let you know... i'm working on one right now :)
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