We strode along the
beach, our deep prints marking love,
but then, The Wave came.
beach, our deep prints marking love,
but then, The Wave came.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Prints in the Sand
ChrisJ
*beautiful*spirit*
Sad, but describes some of the heartbreaks of love. Good job!
NEVER_PerfectThis is GREAT because it makes me want to know how you feel about that, what does that mean to you? To want MORE, means a poem is that good .
IamtheshyStargirlOh wow. This is absolutely gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Freaking amazing job, Pressedlee!!!!
mokonaReally nice. You manage give out a deep meaning in three lines. That's what I love about haikus.
Big waves always come
it is if the print was deep
enough to stay there
mcnwritingsoul
luv it!!! would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!
timeformetofly7oh, that was deep, man. Good job!! :)
CoolBreezeWow you are talented . Would you mind checking some of my work out?
BleedingRoseIt's cute yet so deep at the same time . . . I love the double meaning, very clever! Great work!
Would you mind checking out some of my articles? Thx! :D
-Rose
la chichi said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:27 am:
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:27 am:
awwwww!!*
that's so sad =(
but still cute...
I love it!!*
horsegirl27short, sad, but from it i can tel ur talented! good job!
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