I need you like a
Drowning man needs oxygen
Save me from myself
Drowning man needs oxygen
Save me from myself
imrighthereyouknowwow... so much emotion in only 17 syllables!
Leona95
Wow, that poem made me catch me breath...that was terrific! So deep. Can you look at my work?
Boosflash
this is really good. you sound all catastrophic and cynical and calm at the samt time-like you would like to be saved but you realy dont care either way. very nice. 5 stars captain.
possiblylindseyouch. i could practically feel your pain. that is amazing in only 17 syllables, amazing job!
Onyx_GypsyThat is deep. You just hit the emotion square on in thirteen words. You're amazing.
insaneprincessi think this is really good;
i can really relate to it !
keep writing !
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