I see your sweet lies
I taste your hurtful neglect
Hooked on pseudo love
I taste your hurtful neglect
Hooked on pseudo love
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
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Absoutely perfect. It's very short and yet, you nailed it completely. I love this.
beautifulspirit
LiveForTheMomentsAhhh! I fell in absolutely love with this poem! It's so so so so so! true (:
Tiffanie_marieJust kidding(: I found out it is in this months issue!
Okay so I have two accounts and this is one of my poems, it says it got published in the magazine but I never got a free copy! Does anybody know which month it was published in???
GangstaEyesGreat haiku! Very powerful so be so few in words. Keep up the good work, and check out some of my stuff?
CJohnsonWOw. All of the words in your poem have depth to them that makes it very complex....Love it!!
Jazzzy517amazing poem. its really hard putting that much meaning into so little words. keep it up. n c if you can look at some of my work...
Thank you very much for the comment!! I will definitely check your work out! Just keep commenting mine(: haha
aww your sweet(: Thank you very much for the comment, I love them(:
crazy love said...
May 10, 2010 at 4:55 pm:
May 10, 2010 at 4:55 pm:
your awesome and you have lots of talent you must be noticed ,louisiana
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