Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Love, Anonymous Love, Anonymous By Jane_P, San Clemente, CA More by this author From a stranger far away Love, Anonymous « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 17 comments. Post your own! Report abuse A_Dreamer said... Jul. 8, 2010 at 9:07 pm: Great haiku! Short, but sweet. Good job! Jane_P replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 11:23 pm : Thanks so much, fellow mental ward friend. :DDD Report abuse S_Oehvren_ said... Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:33 pm: Excellent Haiku. It is intriguing and exotic. The conclusion shouts "sequel." Jane_P replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:06 pm : Awww thanks! A sequel might be a good idea! S_Oehvren_ replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:09 pm : With long distance relationships, sequels are not unusual. I hope for your happiness. Jane_P replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:27 am : Well, my inspiration for this piece doesn't even know I exist. But I want it to stay that way, or else the poem loses it's meaning. :) Jane_P replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:28 am : "its meaning"* S_Oehvren_ replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:30 am : Even more intriguing! But remember, the writer in you is only part of the whole you, and all of you needs nourishment in a different way. Jane_P replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:36 am : You're right. But I think part of the beauty of secret admirers is that they're secret. =) It was also just one of those things where someone is outside your window and you get a rush of inspiration from them for some reason. I want to leave it at just that, because it's perfect just as it is. ^^ S_Oehvren_ replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 12:49 am : You go, girl. Jane_P replied... Jul. 8, 2010 at 1:06 am : HAHA, lol, thanks! Report abuse 201395 said... Jul. 6, 2010 at 4:51 pm: This is really amazing, so beautiful and simple! Please check out some of my work. Keep on writing! Jane_P replied... Jul. 6, 2010 at 8:52 pm : Thank you so much! I was inspired by watching a handsome stranger out of my window. Strange but inspirational occurence. relientkgirlie replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 3:11 pm : Sweet this is just too cute!! :) Jane_P replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:10 pm : Thanks! :) writer24/7/365 replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:11 pm : That's such a pretty photo! Jane_P replied... Jul. 7, 2010 at 11:08 pm : I know, I can't believe ♥-shaped berries exist! Who knew?