I make it clear that
Our door is closed forever
But you keep knocking.
Our door is closed forever
But you keep knocking.
Supernova7
It was short but there are alot of ways you can interpret it. I liked it:) Please comment and rate my work:)
thankyou so much and dont worry about it i will!!
steph95it really good.. simple and nice.. can u plz check nd comment my work!! thx
kiwi12At first, I thought this was really stupid, because I've always found it annoying when people are persistant even though you closed the door. Then, I sort of laughed because there are many sides to this poem. I like it.
your welcome, for sure. check out some of my stuff too, if you can.
lorena.loves.starsGreat saying :)
MelanieLouisevery good :) i like your writing. could you rate and comment on some of mine? i would love to hear your opinion :)
ShahedNice nice!!
Good job! :)))
writingchickThat was like super super super good! i love it! very creative! probably the best hauki i've ever read! great job :) if you could rate on comment on my work when you get the chance i'd appreiate it :)
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