Shorter
as it burns,
Brighter
as it learns.
Life, a Candle.
as it burns,
Brighter
as it learns.
Life, a Candle.
Daani said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 3:36 pm:
Aug. 31, 2010 at 3:36 pm:
The concept of the poem is amazing... And the way You've written...I dont think so anyone would've done that i a handfullof lines... Well....I like ur poetry :P
condorur poem is short but really nice i love the whole metaphor idea
nice work ;]
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