Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > crow's wings crow's wings By SassyJones, Los Altos Hills, CA More by this author Soft as crow's wings breeze flutters in morning calling people stop « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse SassyJones said... Oct. 24, 2011 at 6:22 pm: thanks! yeah it was supposed to be " as a crow's wings" Report abuse Blue4 said... Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:22 pm: It's nice, I like the deep message in here; you're short a syllable in the first line, though.
Join the Discussion
This article has 2 comments. Post your own!