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Away with this game
I never wanted to play
Away with these lies

You think you're winning?
As we both spiral deep down
In a losing turn

I'm walking away
You can't tempt me back again
With false winning dreams




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pandagirl312This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 10:34 am:
I like instead of cramming all of your thoughts into one haiku, you used three. Good idea. This is a really cool poem... I like it a lot. :) I agree with Babygirl that the last two lines are the best. :) Also the picture goes well with it. Good job! 
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 8:41 pm:
i love thiss. especially the last part. "You can't tempt me back again with false winning dreams." YOu haave amazingg talent:D
 
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Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:19 pm :

thx!  i rly appreciate the feed back doll! =]

-Roze

 
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