Unrequited Love

This is so beautiful. I can def. relate!

This should be in the Mag!

 

Good job... And the verses are really haikus... :))

SHORT BUT SWEET!! :))

Wow that was great!  I read the first few lines and was like, how in the world is this about unrequited love? After I read the last three lines, I was like O.O It gave me chills!  It was like, really really really great!  Great doesn't even describe it, it's that good!

The first bit appears to be sweet, like a romantic line to a lover, but it turns out it's false and the love is not shared by both. Excellent job, I find this very unique. :)

The first three lines tricked me and I like that. It was surprising and odd to read: because I can be no colder than when I am in your clutching arms. A love that has fallen flat. I like it.

Me reading first two lines: *aww cute* :)

Me reading rest of the poem: O.o 

Wow. Where did this come from? It is definitely not cute. Actually, it's kind of haunting...and I'm not entirely sure what I think of it...which I suppose is a good thing, because it makes the poem interesting. Is this from personal experience? It seems genuine, so either it is, or you are a very good liar. :)