Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Severed Severed By CieraDesiree, hagerstown, IN More by this author I guard a dead heart That is the only sad part For the rest is numb « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse ohheyyyelli said... Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:11 pm: You have a really nice writing style[: Report abuse Delictious said... Jul. 13, 2011 at 5:55 pm: I really like it... Short, simple, and makes you think!(: Report abuse Sara G. said... Jul. 12, 2011 at 8:25 am: I love this. You did a great job conveying the emotion in just a few words. Report abuse Alon_Freevoice said... Jul. 12, 2011 at 5:01 am: This is good and I can raelly relate to it... Keep writing... :))) CieraDesiree replied... Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:18 pm : Thanks guys=)
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