Stay Away
You can’t see who I am
Be happy with my surface shell
You can’t see who I am
Be happy with my surface shell
Garnet77
I like this! It's simple, but I like the way you did this.
Alon_FreevoiceA haiku is of 5-7-5 lines.
Yours is 3-6-8. It's not the typical haiku though but who says you can't make your own style?!
Nice try, though...
Yours is 3-6-8. It's not the typical haiku though but who says you can't make your own style?!
Nice try, though...
Well... that's a true Japenese haicu... but I've seen many Haicus that aren't that form... just have a total count of 17 syllables...
Hey, I didn'y sat it's bad! It's actually good that you're creating your ownn style... :)
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