That Strange Person (a series of two haikus)

Love this. It's... haunting. Great job (:

I really like this... it's super well written! I can't wait to check out the rest of your work!

i love this, enough said. keep up the nice work!

Its a job well done i have to say. when i look at haikus, i usually have trouble figuring out what they are trying to convey, but this one was easy enough. :) keep writing!

I love perspective writing, and the fact that you could fit that all into six lines, very well done.

Agreed. The perspective is very unique :) I also like that you did more than one haiku instead of lessening it. Keep writing!

Interesting perspective! Cool idea :D

I enjoyed this. Makes you think.

I didn't read the author's note until I finished the poem, and it gave the writing a really unique perspective!  At first I thought it was about a mirror, but now I understand.  Good idea!

i never thought of that i love the original idea great poem what excatly makes a haiku a haiku

Kind of creepy, but good idea nonetheless! I like the flow and how you used two haikus instead of just one. Very unique! Really good job on this!

I liked this idea. Writing about inanimate objects is not something I see often. Good job!

i like them, i don't draw so i can't really relate but still, i like it! :)

I like the idea... nice poem

that's just pure epicness! I can't say I've ever read a poem where someone was thinking of what an inaminate oblect was thinking of. Also, great rythmn it flows very well