Mother and Daughter

, Pebble Beach, CA

I act so mature
Playing with my mother's hair
Making her feel young

This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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dia.dreamer said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:37 am:

aw, this is so sweet and touching, and somehow still short. keep writing. :)

.Izzy. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 10:22 am:

Short, simple, but very meaningful. Good job!

Raytheraym said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:26 pm:

I like it. It's simple, yet deep.

Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 5:05 am:

I don't think mature and playing go along together. This is a good haiku anyway. If only I'm so sweet to a mother...