Victim of man’s rape,
nature is sobbing again;
fresh dew on the ground.
nature is sobbing again;
fresh dew on the ground.
Lexie96I love this... normally I'm not one for haikus, but this is really good! You just might have turned me into a believer :)
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IamtheshyStargirl
Harsh, painful, and full of emotion. Haikus are supposed to do that, convey emotion, you know.
redhairCat
I agree. Very short and powerful (and sad).
Lola_BlackOkay, I'm in love with this! Short and powerful; the best way a poem can be! ♦Five Stars♦
thanks, Lola_Black. :D I've read your work...you're awesome at writing!
HarebelleI would never have thought to describe a plant like that! This is amazing, especially since it's so short...keep writing!
thanks.. :) I checked out your poems.....they're really nice..!! you too keep writing. :D
I mean your poem and your story...you just recently joined, right?
Yeah I did...but thanks for your comment, it's really encouraging!
:D thanks for your comments too! can't wait to read more of your work...!
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