Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > On my mind. On my mind. By HeartMindSoul, Port Aransas, TX More by this author Void opens within my chest, Swallowing my heart. « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse writingchick said... Sept. 8, 2011 at 2:44 pm: I personally don't think the haiku is lame! I like it (: HeartMindSoul replied... Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:38 pm : Thanks a lot! It's great to get feedback from others. It's greatly appreciated.