Inhale salty air
Swish it around and spit it
Out like a mouthwash
Swish it around and spit it
Out like a mouthwash
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
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KatsK
This is really good. Although it's short, it's just specific enough to give the reader details.
CraftyCinamaticGood "sensory details" LOL The thought of spitting it out like mouthwash creates a feeling of how salty and thick the air must be
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