The Rainbow after
The storm is you, giving me
The hope to move on.
The storm is you, giving me
The hope to move on.
so_joy
Magnificent. One of the best haikus I've ever read.
Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!
Magnificent. One of the best haikus I've ever read.
Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!
hippiechick99I have to say that usually I don't like limereks...but I really love yours. They make me think about poetry more than I usually would.
teamo14
Taphephobia
Hey so I was looking through comments by people on my work and I noticed you commented on mine and I noticed on your profile you're from Wisconsin (like me) Jus' saying. Anyway I usually don't like haikus but I did like this one. Nice job!
Awesome!!! ANd thanks!! :) Are you a Packers fan??
........I won't say they s.uck like most Bears fans would say, but my family is split in half when it comes to football.
.......I won't say they s.uck like most Bears fans would.
Hey my reply isn't coming through but basically....no.
lol my dad is a Bears fan, and my mom and me are Packer Backers....so yeah u can say it can pretty bloody at my house!! lol
Me and my dad against my mom and bro. But I do give the Packers some credit; they do deserve that much.
I.Just.Wanna.Be.Me.LoveeI ♥ It! :D
And I love the positive feedback!! I'm glad you liked my haiku. :)
PookieBooskiThis is sweet :)
You're sweet, Pookie and Naman!! :) Thanks so much for commenting! It really means a lot to me. Merry Christmas! :D
Short and sweet!!
Though I would have loved it even more had it been a little longer!
CarrieAnn13Excellent work! It really rings true and you used the proper amount of syllables. I really have no criticism, so great work and keep writing!
thanks carrieann! :) i like ur work too. Please check out and rate/comment on my other work..i even have some photography....merry christmas!! :)
ZxarraNice! Is this something that actually happened to you or did you just write it based on other people's experiences? Its short but sweet.
IceFox416Love it! If this is a haiku, I think the 2nd line has one too many beats, but that's a minor thing. Otherwise, it's great! :)
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