Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Battle of love Battle of love By Crazymexican, jay, ME More by this author Love is a battle A war of pain and hurting Only time will heal pain « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse eliana924 said... Jan. 2, 2012 at 8:14 pm: Good job, especially because haikus are hard because they're short and have a strict number of syllables. Although be wary of repeating words like "pain." Michaelseanchavez replied... Jan. 2, 2012 at 9:46 pm : Yea had a hard time of thinking of another word. Probably going to do some more of these. Thanks for the advice though
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