Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Snowflakes Snowflakes By Hetalia-otaku, Sweden, ME More by this author Little fragile flakes Dancing through the frigid air Turning the world white. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 6 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Fire.. said... Apr. 9, 2012 at 10:29 am: I love Haikus and this is one of my favorites! good job! Report abuse Choosing2Live4Christ said... Mar. 14, 2012 at 11:47 am: In Wisconsin it's the same with snow :D but we have an early spring this year, however your Haiku is awesome :D Report abuse bass_rockrgrl13 said... Jan. 20, 2012 at 8:54 am: The personification and vivid imagery add a nice touch! Well done! Report abuse Silver2black said... Jan. 20, 2012 at 7:57 am: 5,7,5, Beautiful, fragile snow fall, I agree the world does look some what white drowning in snow, I think the last line could be said a bit stronger ! Report abuse josika said... Jan. 10, 2012 at 12:07 pm: so pretty! well written! Report abuse Donutboy345 said... Jan. 9, 2012 at 12:07 pm: I like it, though I could do without the snow where I am. I never was much of a fan of haikus, either... But I like it!
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