Drain My Tears

By WhiteWings, Houston, TX

One tear stained eye bleed.
Bright smile of one killing me soft.
Punishment for ones' failure.

Sweet redemption comes.
Pain ceases from deep with in.
Now, I live for you.

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WhiteWings said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:05 am:

L.O.L I did put too many syllabols. I guess I was in the mode and sort of accidentally ignored the requierments. L.O.L

sandyflower replied...
Apr. 2, 2012 at 4:57 pm :

i love it my love!!!! so very amazing in every way.

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Blue4indigo said...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 3:19 pm:

This was lovely as well, I really like the imagery in it. I like the second one especially! The first one, I believe had too many syllables in the last two lines. (not trying to be picky or anything...)

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WhiteWings said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 2:20 pm:

I love it. Everytime I read it. I love it more!!!!

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poetidea_myworld_22 said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 1:27 pm:

i love it!!!!!

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Charlotte_Ryu said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:21 pm:

DEEP! EMOTIONAL! AND BRILLIANT! :D KEEP ON WRITING YOU SMART WRITER YOU! :D

WhiteWings replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 1:41 pm :

Thanks. Will do.

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WhiteWings said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:13 pm:

I like it more because I understand where I am coming from. I worry that others won't. I really love it.