Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Fate Master Fate Master By asofnow, Troy, MI More by this author Your palm outstretched as it falls: My fate in your hand « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 1 comment. Post your own! Report abuse LoudDreamer said... Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:46 pm: very good! I like it. There is a somewhat...... slyly smooth feeling to this haiku. I don't think this was your intention at all, but when I read this my first thought was "politition". By the way, I took your advice and tried to write my first haiku, I am not sure I did a good job, but I would like you to look at it. It is called, "It's Spring".