Your sinister smile;
Your palm outstretched as it falls:
My fate in your hand
Your palm outstretched as it falls:
My fate in your hand
LoudDreamer
very good! I like it. There is a somewhat...... slyly smooth feeling to this haiku. I don't think this was your intention at all, but when I read this my first thought was "politition".
By the way, I took your advice and tried to write my first haiku, I am not sure I did a good job, but I would like you to look at it. It is called, "It's Spring".
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