Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > It's Spring It's Spring By TheEpic95, Leechburg, PA More by this author It speaks of new flowers growing, Life blossoms. It's Spring. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 17 comments. Post your own! Report abuse SaphiraBrightscales said... Mar. 26 at 6:08 am: That's so full of LIFE exactly like it should be. Just amazing. Plus your words just meld in perfectly. Like this one! TheEpic95 replied... Mar. 29 at 9:26 pm : Thank you, Saphira. You are one of the writer's I like on this site, so I'm glad to hear you like it :) SaphiraBrightscales replied... Mar. 30 at 2:47 pm : You're always welcome,,, and WOW really, I am just WOW, it's amazing to know that you like my writing....Or is it me as a person? :P TheEpic95 replied... yesterday at 10:54 pm : Lol! Little of both....? You have some writings that I admire. But your also Hilarious! Two of my own qualities. ;) you can call me Epic, or prefferably Christi. Do i call you Saphira....? SaphiraBrightscales replied... today at 11:02 am : I'm so overjoyed that you used the word "admire" for a writing of mine... And also amazed but the latter as no one has ever called me "Hilarious" before, this is definitely a new word for me ( as in to be used for myself) WOW, Thank you for this, Christi, I'd like that. You can call me "Dua". That's my name. It is pronouncable, isn't it? Report abuse xxtennis13xx said... Dec. 8, 2012 at 11:43 pm: I am surprised by how much I like this--I'm more of a long poem person. Very well-done! TheEpic95 replied... Mar. 29 at 9:25 pm : Haha, well, I am a long poem writer, this is a significant shift for me. Report abuse SuNshiNe007 said... May 9, 2012 at 11:27 am: I like this, great job:) Hope you have a great day! TheEpic95 replied... Mar. 29 at 9:27 pm : thanks, sunshine. Although it is nearly a year later and I am SUPER late in replying, you made my day TODAY! Report abuse poet100 said... Apr. 8, 2012 at 5:03 pm: I thorougly enjoyed it; great imagery in such a short piece of writing! LoudDreamer replied... Apr. 8, 2012 at 5:11 pm : thanks, glad you liked it. LoudDreamer replied... May 9, 2012 at 5:44 pm : yes, eight in the second line. "new" shouldn't have been there. It's my first haiku, so I didn't catch it off the bat. I'm glad you enjoyed it, anyhow. Thankyou. SuNshiNe007 replied... May 14, 2012 at 1:17 pm : Your very welcome:) Report abuse asofnow said... Apr. 7, 2012 at 1:26 am: I really likes it. I enjoyed the personification. Your word choices are very good. But I think the second line the syllable count was off. I'm not sure, maybe it's just me. Good Job! I hope you had fun writing this ;) TheEpic95 replied... yesterday at 10:49 pm : I sure did! And your right, id edited out "new", then posted th eunedited one. Im stupid :p Report abuse Silver2black said... Mar. 19, 2012 at 6:13 am: Very Good :D I think this Haiku could be a little stronger... I counted the syllables Very Well Done, Sweet & cute :D !!!! LoudDreamer replied... Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:14 pm : Thankyou, it is my first one! Sweet and cute was my goal!