It comes: warm, laughing.
It speaks of new flowers growing,
Life blossoms. It's Spring.
It speaks of new flowers growing,
Life blossoms. It's Spring.
SaphiraBrightscales
That's so full of LIFE exactly like it should be. Just amazing. Plus your words just meld in perfectly. Like this one!
Thank you, Saphira. You are one of the writer's I like on this site, so I'm glad to hear you like it :)
You're always welcome,,, and WOW really, I am just WOW, it's amazing to know that you like my writing....Or is it me as a person? :P
Lol! Little of both....? You have some writings that I admire. But your also Hilarious! Two of my own qualities. ;) you can call me Epic, or prefferably Christi. Do i call you Saphira....?
I'm so overjoyed that you used the word "admire" for a writing of mine... And also amazed but the latter as no one has ever called me "Hilarious" before, this is definitely a new word for me ( as in to be used for myself) WOW, Thank you for this, Christi, I'd like that. You can call me "Dua". That's my name. It is pronouncable, isn't it?
xxtennis13xxI am surprised by how much I like this--I'm more of a long poem person. Very well-done!
Haha, well, I am a long poem writer, this is a significant shift for me.
SuNshiNe007I like this, great job:) Hope you have a great day!
thanks, sunshine. Although it is nearly a year later and I am SUPER late in replying, you made my day TODAY!
I thorougly enjoyed it; great imagery in such a short piece of writing!
yes, eight in the second line. "new" shouldn't have been there. It's my first haiku, so I didn't catch it off the bat. I'm glad you enjoyed it, anyhow. Thankyou.
asofnow
I really likes it. I enjoyed the personification. Your word choices are very good. But I think the second line the syllable count was off. I'm not sure, maybe it's just me. Good Job! I hope you had fun writing this ;)
I sure did! And your right, id edited out "new", then posted th eunedited one. Im stupid :p
Silver2blackVery Good :D I think this Haiku could be a little stronger... I counted the syllables Very Well Done, Sweet & cute :D !!!!
Thankyou, it is my first one! Sweet and cute was my goal!
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