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Great! Although this goes against a poet's belief, I think sometimes moments are too special for words.. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!  

Maybe the meaning is that our actions speak louder than words---gestures and looks mean more, right? or something along the lines of that?

I like the message of this poem though it's kinda confusing. I think in the first line, you mean write instead of wrote? I'm not sure. Anyway, I do think too that the first line doesn't seem to fit with the second and third line. But the second and third line both have six syllables each. In a haiku, the second should have 7 and the third should have 5 just like the first. Anyway, keep writing and practice more :)))

i agree. i usually write long poems to get the massage across. i liked your poem; keep writing!!

I really love the simplicty of this one. It's hard to write so simply without sounding cliche, and I think you did that. Nice job :)