Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Stellar Collision Stellar Collision By bearsfan654, Elmhurst, IL More by this author Collides with another star Making a new sun « Previous article More by this author Next article » September & October Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse CarrieAnn13 said... Apr. 20, 2012 at 9:04 pm: Dramatic, yet to the point, as haikus are meant to be. Your syllable counting is, of course, spot-on and I like your choice of words. "Collides" give the reader a very powerful mental image. Excellent work! Report abuse bearsftw said... Apr. 20, 2012 at 2:10 pm: This is very interesting. Typically, haikus would be about something naturistic on Earth, but you described an action taking place outside of Earth. Nice!