Breeze teasing my skin,
Sand running through my fingers,
The ocean waiting.
Sand running through my fingers,
The ocean waiting.
DaisyAngelI love this poem. It is so simple and beautiful, which makes reading it almost relaxing. There needs to be more poems like this. Five stars!
girly21
I love the way you described everything in this poem, I got a clear image of everything you described! Overall, lovely haiku!
dragonfly95i like it, it has a clear message to it, and i really liked the last line especialy. nicely done :)
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