Pictures which were once
memories , now lie around
unrecognized.
memories , now lie around
unrecognized.
SteelersJdog
I really like this one. I'm pretty intruiged by the subjects of pictures in your poem. This holds such deep meaning. I'm very impressed :)
JoPepperVery good job my only criticism is that "unrecognized" doesn't fit the poem structure, although it does end the poem nicely.
i really like this! its short but is very powerful!
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