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The spiteful thorn cuts one
A deep wound that goes unnoticed first
For the rose is beautiful




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NeVassaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 27, 2012 at 10:04 pm:
I like how you incorporate deception without actually naming it.
 
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Jul. 28, 2012 at 9:02 am :
thanks ;D !
 
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Jul. 19, 2012 at 10:15 pm:
Thank you so much, that means a ton to me :')
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 18, 2012 at 9:07 am:
this poem speaks for so much of beuty and it is so percice!! AMAZING! keep writing
 
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