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I was once defined.
Pristine. But I am worn down.
Soon I will just break.



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ChobaniLuvinPenguinThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 9:13 am:
Amazing, amazing poem!!!!! I totally get it!!! Personally, I love extended metaphors of all sorts, so great job with that!!!! It's simple and delicate, but it has a lot of deep meaning!
 
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Oct. 31, 2012 at 5:54 pm :
Thanks! :)
 
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cayaTWThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 4:07 pm:
You can write poetry about pencils.  That's awesome!
 
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Oct. 25, 2012 at 5:14 pm :
Thanks for the comment! :) I thought it would be interesting. It's a comparison between a person and a pencil, really. The person is so frustrated and worn out that they are about to "break." :)
 
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